BSS RPG -- Discussion & OOC

I'm intrigued.

Mixing shamanism with necromancy is an interesting way to be dealing with spiritual forces.

Here's three of the avatars made so far. Zarak, Runa and Nakia.

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They look fab.

First time ever I use the elf ears Had no choice for Runa's ancestry as a half orc.

I have shifted focus a bit and originally the dungeon was supposed to be most of the meat of the game. I'm gonna go ahead and make a world with towns and such also.

I've got a bit of banter written for Zarak and Runa about the Shamanism/Necromancy merging, possibly.

Sounds great!

I notice you didn't use eyepatches this time around so that's a nice change.

A little bit of banter.

I wanted to get your thoughts on the final tidbit, which is Nakia's thoughts. I put it on top as it's meant to be thoughts on the situation and not an actual dialogue. I thought this might be fun and that those reactions would add some storytelling dimensions to the project. Let me know what y'all think.

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Rather than using brackets to indicate the character is thinking, are you able to use a different font or italics?

The reason I suggest this is because the dialogue appears in sections. If it was in italics or a different font, the continuation of 'thought' would be completely clear.

I tried [i] for italic but it didn't work. I am going to keep digging. But how do you feel about the sharong of thoughts? Does it contribute to thr storytelling experience or does it feel like clutter?/

IMO, it contributes to the story telling experience.

To simplify things, each character will have their own intro than all will meet at the circle. Entry in the circle will not be immediate, but the main quest will start from that point.

Re: dialogue. I am doing my best to channel all your writing styles and stay faithful to the characters but this will be my take on it. I am the King of dialogue anyway so all good

Possibly another video later tonight.

Seems to me your project has come a long way visually as well.