Sue77
Enlightened Viewer
 |  Subject: Wrote this a few years ago  Mon Mar 18, 2013 9:05 pm | |
| Company
Anxiety I may have offended
Dissipates in to an intimacy that furthers frankness.
In a cosy, fire-hearthed room
Her soft furred feline follows
My scent from shoes, to bag, to feet,
Marking intermittently.
Fine food, openness forging friendship,
What more from a day  |
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Carabas
Pole Dancer Impersonator
| | Subject: Re: Wrote this a few years ago Tue Mar 19, 2013 1:54 am | |
| Interesting imagery, it's definitely a nice poem for the saloon. It would be nice if you could record it, I'd love to listen to it and see how it sounds like in your own voice especially when it comes to scansion and rhythm.  |
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Blood Red Eagle
Son of Loki
| | Subject: Re: Wrote this a few years ago Tue Mar 19, 2013 8:38 am | |
| I agree, it would make for an interesting piece of VA! |
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Sue77
Enlightened Viewer
| | Subject: Re: Wrote this a few years ago Wed Mar 20, 2013 11:40 pm | |
| I'll do a recording of this soon, I promise. However, I went to the cinema on Mon and ate an icecream which has clogged me right up. The Hagen Das ones are fine, but the Ben and Jerry's are a killer! That'll teach me. |
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